All my work.

[acton70]

Ok, here is all my work. I write stories on a website called ficly, It's nothing big, but it's just for users to criticise on others work, and to help improve writing.

Most of my stories are here. Some i am ashamed of and some i am proud of. If you have enough time read them Btw Jon is my real name.

http://ficly.com/authors/horrorstoriesftw

[Drag]

Cool. I will look at them later

[StickWorkshop]

Nice work (:

War Poem is pretty good but quite short- why don't you finish it off?
I lolled at the grenade one too

[Drag]

I read some of them. They are very good.

[Kaynil]

Thank you for sharing them with us.

Hey , you write short stores.
I can't do that. >.<

Grenade!! Made me chuckle. XD

Out of curiosity, could you tell us which are the three you like the best and the three you like the less of your stuff and why?

[Drag]

What are you interviewing him or something?! lol

[acton70]

I've been inactive for a couple iof days but i'm back now

And to answer kaynil's question.


My 3 best pieces. Well nightmare in the couldersack pt 1 would be one of them. My grammar then was terrible but it was a pretty good idea, and people seemed to like it.

next would be space ship tragedies, I was inspired by red dwarf and decided to write something similair. If you haven't read or watched red dwarf you must check it out! I found i managed to add some humour into that story.

3rd would be in a town called dersingham. Back then i was lazy and didn't bother to check it. i wish i had as it could of been good. reading peoples critiscisms made me laugh lol.

The worst.

Nightmare in the couldersack last and final part.

This was definatly rushed, the end was terrible and the story made no sense. I am ashamed i ever wrote this.

I'm not sure about the other 2 worst stories i wrote.

[ThePivotParade]

I liked the santa one best, it was clever with the meat in mince pies being revealed as elves guts. Nice work.

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