killer8529 poems

[killer8529]

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hears another one but if you find a gramical error plz tell me
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There was a man both old and poor
His eyes were cold his hair was mauve
He just sat day after day
Upon the rocks of the old shore,
Many said that man was crazy
Many said the man was nuts
When you asked why he sat
He just said I wait for home
He sat and waited for many years
Atop the rocks alone and cold
Till one day the sky grew dark
He jumped in the air like a gun shot
And yelled goodbye my home has come,
A raw through the clouds a dragon came down
It flew through the air all over the town
Till it saw the man both poor and old
It came right down onto the land
And the man jumped up into its hand
They flew off together into the distance
As the town watch in awe and a smiling old mister
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The room is silent
The sky is dark
A boy in the doorway
The room dose quake
The fear he brings
He walks to a desk
At the end on the room
The clouds start crying, in heavenly floods
He’s covered in blood, and soaked to the bone
With eyes all watching, he slowly moves
The moment he sits light did strike
The room was blinded for a fleeting moment
As their eyes refocus the boy was gone,
The table tipped over, the chair in the wall,
With blood covered, stains all over the floor,
That’s all that remained, of the boy soaked with blood,
And heavenly rains.

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The monster of the world
It doesn’t think
It doesn’t plan
It has no brain at all
All it does form dusk to dawn is rush towards your soul

It doesn’t fail
It doesn’t break
It will not disappoint
All it does form dusk to dawn brings terror to your soul

Never stoping
Never ceasing
Never looking back
Keep away from its reach or die within its grasp.

Try to stop it
Try to kill it
All you’ll get is pain
If you want to send it back then get out of its way

Can you feel it
Can you see it
Or is it just a ghost
Will it be the death of me or is it just the coast

Do you fear it
Do you dread it
Or are you just big-headed
If you want to be a hero then bring the one that’s dreading

The one it seeks
The one it kills
The one that is the devil
Bring him forth so he may die or we will go to heaven
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People are you going to sit
are you going to do nothing
While the earth burns to the ground
You sit a watch your house burn
The flame rises above your head
You don’t run you don’t hide and you don’t fight
Why do you let your house burn
Why do you let the world burn
If you would save your house
Why not save the world
Can you see the people are dying
Are we so evil to kill the innocent
Are we so evil to kill the poor
Are we just a little bit isolated
Can’t you see that we are just a dying race
A race that will end soon
Because we want to sit
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the world I live
small dragon flying over head on fragile wings
is noting to these gigantic beasts
we ride we die
dragons follow us to our death
we fly through wars we fly through dust
the dust of our enemies the dust of our friends
I ride the winds I ride the waves
I ride the rivers when they run
I fly my friends I clear the land
I clear the earth of my foes
As I ride this magnificent beasts
This is the world I live in
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The rise and fall of times gone past the everlasting war that no one ever sees
The time gone past the storeys that go untold the lives that go missing
The souls we save the souls we lose the times we gain the time we forget
Our happiness is only a moment but pain can last forever

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Dust to dust
Ashes to ashes
The life of one for the many
Is a sacrifice I am willing to take

The choice of one thing can affect the world around you
I butterfly’s beat of a wing can cause a world of difference
Just think back and change the smallest of things
From your memory and you will see the difference
The most smallest of things can change a day
It could be just getting up and not taking a shower
Or forgetting to have your morning coffee
Anything can change the world just by doing or not doing

I fly through wars I fly through dust
The dust of my enemies the dust of my friends
I ride the wind I ride the waves
I ride the rivers when they run
I ride the dragons that clear the land
I fly above the cloudy night
With dragons on high though out the sky


Even though dragons are my life
I still think back to a time
Where I did not sit adragon back
I sat at home dreaming
While waiting for the rain
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a dragon on high
I fly up in the sky the wind pulls me around the rocks so far below me are not so very far
The end of my life is not now I am still young I am not old why but why dose the ground get closer
I see I feel as the wind pulls me down till my dyeing breath my final goodbye
Now I sit in the clouds and watch my friends weep not even the god could help them now
The last of my race now dead and in the sky till I see your souls rise up, good bye
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the flames of fury
the flames of fury the flames of death
the lightning of the forgoten
the fire of our friends
for the battles we lost
for the war we won
for the days gone by
our claws our hammers fall to the ground
our battel is over but theirs must begin
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Through the valleys and the plains
There is a life, I have forgotten
The past, my life is blank to me now
In my darkest hour they never came, they wept
They knew that my bond was broken
And my heart was wide open
But to enter the madness of my mind
They could not
I am still changed to this world
With none to guide and non to follow me
I sit alone, in my castle of stone
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They fought for us they lived for us
Even in our darkest hour they hoped for us
The fights we have the wars we win
Mean nothing to me anymore
I have what I need, I have what I want
Where my heart is wide open
Where my bond is unbroken
,I would die for them
Cross the sky for them
I will wait for them
I will stay with them
And my fire will guide them home
Back to my open arm
Even this quiet world which stars do hide from
There all I need they set me free once more
Your memories can never be forgotten
Only locked from your mind
I would die for one
Cross the sky for one
I will wait for one
I will stay with one
My fire will guide them back
To the place that they belong
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when life around you seems like dust
and the sorrows of many seek you out
look to heavens and see my face
to remember what you live for
you live to live you live to create
you live to write you live to desecrate
whatever you live for look to me
and your secrets will be reviled for all to see
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For Ferelga, a friend, a lover, a dragon
She flies through war she flies no more.
She fell my friends thought the clouds to her end.
To save our world from our selves
Ferelga saved our world but lost her life
Against my will she always was but never did she do wrong
She saved many she saved us twice never did she falter
She became our friend and our friends became hers
Many were her friends but non were her mate
Many dragons came to be her mate but all were rejected
Only when in her final hour did she come clean off who she lost
Her mate died before we met by the hands of human blood
If her mate never died she never would have met me
And become the greatest hero of all, she saved us all
Her race was thought to die that day but she left an egg
No one knows where she hid it or where she kept it
But all we know is that she left her life behind
Instead of killing us she saved us all.
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my soul of love my soul of hurt
my body of kindness my body of hate
a life of truth a life of death
the sorrow of one is the sorrow of many
a cry heard through out the night a monster has killed again
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Flame, furry, power, glory
The battle rages above the clouds
They fight for freedom and glory
The seven continents rage all together in the sky
The silence is deafening before the storm
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Speed, power, agility, skill,
They matter in the air
The turns and spins the thrill of it all
Time seams to slow and then becomes faster
All around are destroying your friends
So the dogfight begins the biggest the world has seen
The fight the covers the world only one can stand to fight another day
He is the fastest he is the strongest the best of them all
An ace of the world will win the war
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A fight of the gods of the air
A fight of heroes in flight
Who will win who will lose the battle has barely begun.
The behemoths have been released
Let the air be filled with bullets and the ground filled with wreckages
The war above will be grand and glory will be give to those who live
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The desert soil the desert air
Dawn approaches and the dust and ash fly
The sky is blackened by many rotor wings
But fighters still rule the sky
As our friends in formation appear in the distance of the rising sun the battle of sky begins
All on the ground stop and stare in wonder of their prowess in the sky
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every night alone and cold
every day I am home alone
i sit and watch the world go by
i sit and watch and friends say goodbye
the sky Is darkening the clouds have begun to cr
my soul bleeds out my body dose crumple
my hope is gone my spirt lost my true desires forgotten
all my friends lost and forgotten all my family dead and ashes
for the time I remember is long past but the time of forgiving I'll never come
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for my story was never told
for my song was never sung
my hope
my spirt
and my soul will live on
my the ddad sleep in peace
forever more

[ivorymaid]

I really like the first one!

[Damxge]

Not bad my good sir, not bad at all!

[killer8529]

thanks

[Drag]

Yea the first is really good! I want to see more poetry from you :!:

[killer8529]

and you will get more when the moment strikes me

[Drag]

Saweeet! Can't wait!

[killer8529]

hears another one but if you find a gramical error plz tell me
a dragon on high
I fly up in the sky the wind pulls me around the rocks so far below me are not so very far
The end of my life is not now I am still young I am not old why but why dose the ground get closer
I see I feel as the wind pulls me down till my dyeing breath my final goodbye
Now I sit in the clouds and watch my friends weep not even the god could help them now
The last of my race now dead and in the sky till I see your souls rise up good bye

[Damxge]

Very very nice. Not at all stereotypical, which I love ^_^

[killer8529]

plz dont use big words right now its only 5 in the morning and i am brain dead been playing prototype

[Damxge]

lol okay
Its out of the ordinary for a young poet.

[killer8529]

i wouldnt say young been writing poetry for years now and i am 16 i have been writign since i was in year 5
but then again you know more about his than me but me happy that people think my work is good

[Damxge]

You got years and years ahead of you
I'm seventeen and have been writing stories since I was around five or six and I consider myself a babe among elders, its a good idea to do the same; that way you never stop learning.

[killer8529]

sometimes i wish that i could write without help from songs and movies but i dout that it will ever happen sigh i miss the old days of school

[killer8529]

hay all its been updated wont be on for awile for this
ps aparently i lie face palm

[LordTomyh]

I really like these ... way better then mine
Nice Work

[killer8529]

that it where your wrong LordTomyh
most things i write can never be compared to anyone for two reasons spelling and grammer all of it my work but has been edited halfly by a good friend of mine the words havent been changed but they have been changed slighly like once i wrote in a poem so your life will smell like poo when i has this poem to sound really nice to that part my friend picks up on these things and then highlights them and send them back without my friend it yould sound like i was trying to diss someone trust me some of the poems turn to stuff that in not really aprprite to any age below 20 no you know what but manly blood guts the works but really discriptive so thanks for the complement but realy my stuff is not as good as most people.

ps i got magor dajavo from writing this message god i hate that

[Drag]

You mean Deja Vu?

[killer8529]

apparently ive got hand hitting face syndrome today

[Damxge]

lawl
I NEED TO MAKE A FACEPALM SMILEY!!

[killer8529]

yes better do it fast i think i might need it again soon

[Drag]

That might be a bit hard...

I think this usually suffices:

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Or

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[killer8529]

omg i never thought of that thanks saved as a pic to use when needed

[killer8529]

....any insperationl music would be apperarted

[Legotransform]

Here:its linkin park numb

I'm tired of being what you want me to be
Feeling so faithless, lost under the surface
Don't know what you're expecting of me
Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)

[Chorus:]
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there
Become so tired, so much more aware
I'm becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you

Can't you see that you're smothering me,
Holding too tightly, afraid to lose control?
'Cause everything that you thought I would be
Has fallen apart right in front of you.
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you.
(Caught in the undertow, just caught in the undertow)
And every second I waste is more than I can take.

[Chorus:]
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there,
Become so tired, so much more aware
I'm becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you.

And I know
I may end up failing too.
But I know
You were just like me with someone disappointed in you.

[Chorus:]
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there,
Become so tired, so much more aware.
I'm becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you.

[Chorus:]
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there.
(I'm tired of being what you want me to be)
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there.
(I'm tired of being what you want me to be)

OR:Santana into the night



Like a gift from the heavens, it was easy to tell,
It was love from above, that could save me from hell,
She had fire in her soul it was easy to see,
how the devil himself could be pulled out of me,
There were drums in the air as she started to dance,
Every soul in the room keeping time with there hands,
And we sang...

Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
And the voices sang like the angels sing,
And we sang...
Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
And we danced on into the night,
Ay oh ay oh,
Ay oh ay oh,
And we danced on into the night,

Like a piece to the puzzle that falls into place,
You could tell how we felt from the look on our faces,
we was spinning in circles with the moon in our eyes,
The room left them moving between you and I,
We forgot where we were and we lost track of time,
And we sang to the wind as we danced through the night,
And we sang...

Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
And the voices bang like the angels sing,
We're singing...
Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
And we danced on into the night,
Ay oh ay oh,
Ay oh ay oh,
And we danced on into the night,
Ay oh ay oh,
Ay oh ay oh,
And we danced on into the night,

[Solo]

Like a gift from the heavens, it was easy to tell,
It was love from above, that could save me from hell,
She had fire in her soul it was easy to see,
how the devil himself could be pulled out of me,
There were drums in the air as she started to dance,
Every soul in the room keeping time with there hands,
And we sang...

Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
And the voices bang like the angels sing,
We're singing...
Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
And we danced on into the night,
Ay oh ay oh,
Ay oh ay oh,
And we danced on into the night,
(And the voices sang like the angels sing),
Ay oh ay oh,
Ay oh ay oh,
And we danced on into the night,
Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
(Ay oh ay oh),
Ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
(Ay oh ay oh),
Singing ay oh ay oh ay oh ay,
(Ay oh ay oh),
And we danced on into the night...

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